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Old 06-09-2005, 06:58 AM   #16
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Cool! I like this story; it's kind of scary. Make a sequel. Of course you gotta make it good, becuase most sequels are never as good as the first one. Or... make a prequel. :P
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Old 06-09-2005, 11:36 PM   #17
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Hmmm, a prequl could be good too, ok ima start on the sequl!
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Old 06-17-2005, 04:04 AM   #18
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As a fellow horrorthrill writer, I think that was pretty good, but things can be much scary with very correct grammar. It gives an odd aura of seriousness. Also, you should add some sort of outbreak RE style. But try not to cliche. Very good start.

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Old 06-23-2005, 10:09 PM   #19
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i wanted to make it RE style, but i thought it would b too gay if a 17 year old kid decided to take on a hella bunch of zombies
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Old 07-03-2005, 03:25 PM   #20
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The part I bolded made me laugh. You used the wrong word here. How about you learn some english before you correct others ? I think you're looking for "you're". Thanks for the laugh.
The part I bolded made me laugh. You used the wrong word here. How about you learn some ENGLISH before you correct others that correct others? I think you're looking for "you're". Thanks for the laugh.

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