Newbie Lake

Mestru · 11-27-2010, 08:10 PM

There are my new terrains. First time i create something. I need constructive criticism.

Nuclear Arbitor · 11-28-2010, 04:56 AM

first one looks nicely playable and wc3 style.

the second one was issues with the clipping plane and fog but looks ok other than that. quite plain though with just the snow and the trees. needs a little bit of terrain variation and more trees or something similar to fill it.

the third is similar to the second although the flattened rocks look quite strange.

MLB · 11-29-2010, 08:33 PM

1th: Try to make the cliff in the background less straight, and add some bushes or stones to the forest so that you can't look through it so easily.
2th and 3th: These need a more interesting background, maybe adding some hills (not cliffs) helps.

2-P · 01-25-2011, 10:19 PM

First of all you should get rid of those Blizzard cliffs, check out those tutorials/guides if you don't know how (well you might want to look at them anyway, they're very helpful if you're new to terraining): http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?t=76290

Moved to the terrain forum.

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11-28-2010, 04:56 AM	#2
Nuclear Arbitor Reputation Leech Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 1,235 Submissions (1)	first one looks nicely playable and wc3 style. the second one was issues with the clipping plane and fog but looks ok other than that. quite plain though with just the snow and the trees. needs a little bit of terrain variation and more trees or something similar to fill it. the third is similar to the second although the flattened rocks look quite strange.

11-29-2010, 08:33 PM	#3
MLB User Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 15	1th: Try to make the cliff in the background less straight, and add some bushes or stones to the forest so that you can't look through it so easily. 2th and 3th: These need a more interesting background, maybe adding some hills (not cliffs) helps.

01-25-2011, 10:19 PM	#4
2-P la la la Terrain Moderator Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 441 Submissions (14)	First of all you should get rid of those Blizzard cliffs, check out those tutorials/guides if you don't know how (well you might want to look at them anyway, they're very helpful if you're new to terraining): http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?t=76290 Moved to the terrain forum.