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Old 11-13-2006, 11:04 AM   #1
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Hi :)

Is there a nice guy who speak very well english and able to correct this .doc file ? It's from the mission 1 of Acathla.
The one who can do it will be included in the credits of the map.
If you plan to make it, copy and paste each sentence in a third red line to correct it :)

File : http://www.acathla.com/Input/M1%20Te...%20correct.doc
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Old 11-13-2006, 08:44 PM   #2
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I have made the first part untill the "Cinematic Info" headline, if you like my correction work so far I could do the rest, but won't waste my time if it's useless

I must admit that my English is not flawless though so there might slip an error or two past my corrections, if that is the case, I am sorry, no one is perfect I guess
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Old 11-13-2006, 11:00 PM   #3
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Thank you very much :) This sounds good, but i can't know if it's really good ( if i knew that, i would do it :p )
I don't request a very good english, just a nice english without mistake. :)
You can continue plz ! :D
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Will do, but as said I can never assure you that my English is flawless but I will do my best :)
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Old 11-14-2006, 10:15 PM   #5
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No problem, i think it can only be better after ^^
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Sorry for the delay, I am busy lately with school work and other private matters but I will definetly have all done sometime next week :)
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Old 11-25-2006, 10:20 AM   #7
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Hi :) So What's up ?
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I am almost done with the translation, hopefully will finnish it tonight, I have just been very busy this week with alot of things.
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Old 11-26-2006, 03:26 PM   #9
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Ok, because i need it before start acting audition :)
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Old 12-07-2006, 05:27 PM   #10
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...this is a very long "tonight" and "afternoon" :(
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Sorry, I thought that the assignment which I had was easily done but I ended up going to bed half 2 that night because of school work :P

I am working on finnishing the rest right this momment, no school work at all, so it should be finnished within the next 30-40 min.
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Ok, done. Sorry for the extreme long delay, this werent intentional
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Ok no problem , you finished. That's the important. :)
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No problem, good luck with the project!
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