The Deminishing Power - Page 3

BloodStorm2262 · 06-03-2005, 02:48 AM

Well I think its got potential, but instead of focusing so strongly on speach... Add more action as stories (not scripts) are based on acts and description, not talking and discussing. But not bad at all, you got my reps.

Azhag · 06-09-2005, 12:38 AM

I am going to post the third chapter very soon.
~Azhag~

06-03-2005, 02:48 AM	#31
BloodStorm2262 User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 266	Well I think its got potential, but instead of focusing so strongly on speach... Add more action as stories (not scripts) are based on acts and description, not talking and discussing. But not bad at all, you got my reps. __________________ When Will It Be So? Perhaps Sooner Than You Think... The \|Nexolude\| Campaign Team Gathering -Inactive Campaign-

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06-09-2005, 12:38 AM	#32
Azhag User Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 902	I am going to post the third chapter very soon. ~Azhag~