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Old 02-08-2008, 04:21 PM   #1
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some time ago i started modeling a Golem out of boredom and i got quite far, now i wish to ask on some feedback, been too afraid to ask this some time ago <_<, but well, what do you think [its still skinless]
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this is also my first try, so don't go too hard on me

if you have any advice then please, say what it is, i can work on that, any criticism is also welcome, i just want to know what people think
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Old 02-12-2008, 09:47 PM   #2
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i'm working on another model, this one is more interesting for me since i'm going to try and skin this one [no idea how yet] but heres some pictures:

it was supposed to be some sort of spaceship or a hover tank, just those were my ideas and i'm not shure what it looks like most now...

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any skilled moddeler can probaly tell me that it kind of sucks [well thats how i look at it, if i didn't i would be able to improve it]
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Old 02-13-2008, 02:17 PM   #3
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man no offense but these are terrible. In fact they look like your first attempts. What were you expecting people to say other than this? I don't even know what else to say man, you're at such a beginner level yet you want opinions about your stuff...Only thing I can tell you is that you'd better read a lot of tutorials and inform yourself on what's good and what isn't and workflow etc. Also look back at other threads and search on specialized forums (cgsociety, 3Dtotal etc.) threads where beginners posted their work and see what replies they got, if any (usually people tend to ignore such extreme beginners because there really isn't much to say...as I said in my rant about why you shouldn't post your first work, instead of posting here you should read tutorials instead).
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i think i'll stick to my sister as information source since she knows alot about 3dsmax and gmax aswell [i think she can explain things beter then the tutorails can]
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well there you go, even better.
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