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View Poll Results: How do you like the part 2 so far?
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Old 05-16-2006, 09:20 PM   #31
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Not too shabby 6th part.
Though, something to work on would be more description, you know, other than the whole grammar/spelling thing :P
yeah i know... it's getting really dull -.-
I need to stop writing so fast... I just always write in a hurry...
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:08 AM   #32
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Try planning out your story, it might help.
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Old 05-21-2006, 03:27 AM   #33
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Old 08-25-2006, 11:04 PM   #34
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Well, another chapter, this one's not that exciting too but well, I'm trying to make something good up, so the next one will be better.

P.S. I'll be fixing those spelling errors (which I have loads of) in previous chapters, so stay tunned!

Edit: Ok so, i edited all the parts now, so that the "new readers" (if there will be anyway) won't burn thair eyes out. Also edited some events becouse they were writen kind of in a primal way. Enjoy!
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Hey, read it (the new part), it's good, this makes the story have a bit of suspense, makes the reader want to have the next part :D
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Old 08-26-2006, 10:42 AM   #36
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Hey, read it (the new part), it's good, this makes the story have a bit of suspense, makes the reader want to have the next part :D
I see you're quite persistant Undead_L, even though I was away for a long time, you still read the story, thanks.

For thos who voted on the pole explain why did you vote like that, also, no matter how many votes there are for the last option, i won't die... don't bother yourselfes...
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Old 08-26-2006, 01:50 PM   #37
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Oh, I thought this story died... O_o *start reading again*
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Oh, I thought this story died... O_o *start reading again*
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Hey, no problem Reaper. I get bored easily so... :P
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Old 09-16-2006, 12:22 AM   #40
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I get bored easily so... :P
Not sure if it's good or not... but still:

UPDATED!

P.S. I'm hoping to make it a bit twisty right now, so to confuse the reader.

Edit: Also, if someone needs an extremely short discription of what happaned in part 1, just PM me.

Edit # 2: Yet another update, hope this one's not totaly boring, but that "ghoul" will appear a bit further in the story.

Edit # 3: Well... this forum doesn't look lively... but meh, anyway, another update is here.
Also, i see 1000+ view, but only few posts and even less votes. Well not sure if people want to post, or are just too shy, but please do, just post your thoughts if you read the story (though i doubt that 1000+ people read the story this long...)
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Gaaah, you can't end a chapter like that! Btw, the map he was looking... was the same he found on the camp or was found among the papers in the cave?
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Gaaah, you can't end a chapter like that! Btw, the map he was looking... was the same he found on the camp or was found among the papers in the cave?
It was the one he found on his way, to.... erm... well on his way to nowhere. With dead dwarfs and humans lying around and stuff. They were on an expedition as well, but something killed them. (Info in Chapter 7: Thurst for action.)
So anyway, I was planing to write it like that so the reader actualy had some thurst for the next part
Stay tunned! (if any more questions appear or if something is not clear with the story, it's not hard to me to answer them, just ask)
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Well, that last part, the ending was quite...interesting. Write up the next part, the story is definitely getting better.
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Well I'll write the next one today hopefully, so wait
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It was the one he found on his way, to.... erm... well on his way to nowhere. With dead dwarfs and humans lying around and stuff. They were on an expedition as well, but something killed them. (Info in Chapter 7: Thurst for action.)

I was confused when he mentioned that it could be the map of the cave he was in. Maybe also because he didn't watch it until then.
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