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View Poll Results: How do you like the part 2 so far?
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Old 02-08-2006, 09:04 PM   #16
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Fourth part is good. Rep given :D
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Old 02-09-2006, 11:54 AM   #17
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Fourth part is good. Rep given :D
Why Thank you.

Anyway, i can't see anyone else posting here, don't be shy people, just post your thoughts about the story, or suggestions.
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Old 02-09-2006, 03:03 PM   #18
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ahhh this is awesome although the lich is alittle amataur, havent even found itself a phyloctary(i believe thats how its spelled) but why, WHY did you have to send him into the ethereal realm?
(awwwwww your spelling improved drasticly since the last one, oh and rep given)

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Old 02-09-2006, 06:08 PM   #19
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ahhh this is awesome although the lich is alittle amataur, havent even found itself a phyloctary(i believe thats how its spelled) but why, WHY did you have to send him into the ethereal realm?
(awwwwww your spelling improved drasticly since the last one, oh and rep given)
Heh, duno why I had to do so, but just felt like doing it

So anyway, i'm trying to write it in the same style as the first part, but I hope it's still good enough.

Also, i hope I will post some pictures I have drawn of him as a young Lich.
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I tried to read it but there were soo many spelling mistakes it was hard to concentrate on the plot and it seemed rather simple in language: lots of dids and thens and stuff but I suppose english is ur second language?
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I tried to read it but there were soo many spelling mistakes it was hard to concentrate on the plot and it seemed rather simple in language: lots of dids and thens and stuff but I suppose english is ur second language?
English is my third language to be correct.
And yeah, i know thos dids and thens are annoying me too... I'm trying to learn NOT to write them so much...

Edit:Well added something recently...
Don't think if anyone's still reading it, but ah... nevermind...
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You have two episode 4's. Might want to fix that.
Anyways, the "fifth" one was ok, not much action really, and quite short. Can't really say much about it.
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You have two episode 4's. Might want to fix that.
Anyways, the "fifth" one was ok, not much action really, and quite short. Can't really say much about it.
eheh, whoops, didn't see. Thanks for noticing.
But i wrote that episode so to revive the thread, gana write some more soon enough.
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The spelling, grammar and choice of words needs work - but those torturous pains aside, its quite progressive stuff =)
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The spelling, grammar and choice of words needs work - but those torturous pains aside, its quite progressive stuff =)
Heh, yeah, know that, and thanks.

I am trying to improve my english though...
sometimes even use the dictionary to find a word or two *blushes*



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I'm reading!

I got to Episode 3 so far (I have to go in about 5 minutes) and it's comming out alright. I think that you might want to plan out parts of the plotline, so that you can throw in twists and turns whenever you feel like it without having to go back and change stuff (which doesn't work when people have already read it)

It also helps because you know what you're going to write and therefore you write it better.

Still, good job so far. I'll continue reading a little later and tell you what I think!
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I am trying to improve my english though...
sometimes even use the dictionary to find a word or two *blushes*
Using the dictionary is nothing to be ashamed of.

The story is fairly good as far as I've read, but it's kinda repetive.

You've got a serious overuse of exclamation marks (!). Use it for special occations, not every single line.

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Using the dictionary is nothing to be ashamed of.

The story is fairly good as far as I've read, but it's kinda repetive.

You've got a serious overuse of exclamation marks (!). Use it for special occations, not every single line.
Oh... yeah, just noticed that, thanks Travinkel.
Oh and johnfn, I do try to do that, but mostly I write in a rush becouse my comp is often beeing occupied by my brother/uncle/sister and i need to run, so I forget what i wanted to write.
But anyway, the next episode will come soon, and it will involve some things from the first part, so be ready.


Thanks for the comments by the way

Edit: Ok, so here is a picture of Ner'Tharus for those who don't have such a big imagination

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Updated.

Sorry for double post, just wanted to revive this...
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Not too shabby 6th part.
Though, something to work on would be more description, you know, other than the whole grammar/spelling thing :P
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