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Old 12-14-2003, 07:24 PM   #1
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I need some feedback on this pic, like muscles, proportions etc.
Sry 'bout the nudity all moderators:( but its easier to judge and redo when clothing is not yet applied. This is my third picture entry.

Note that this one is cleaned, the original was a mess.

EDIT: She is supposing to be holding a moonglaive, ready to strike on the next sorry bastard who walks by:gsmile: . ...oh, and dont mind the right ear- Ive already noticed that one.

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Old 12-14-2003, 07:27 PM   #2
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In my opinion the left arm looks too thick compared to the right one. everything else looks good.
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Old 12-14-2003, 07:33 PM   #3
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The reason for that is that she has big muscles:gsmile: . I thought when the arm is in that angle, the muscle should show extra much... maybe I was wrong:( .
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Old 12-14-2003, 07:39 PM   #4
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Dont pay too much attention to me, as I said "In my oppinion", wait for some of the better artists here to post feedback.
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Old 12-14-2003, 07:46 PM   #5
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We'll do! *starts to snore in wait for more feedback*
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Old 12-14-2003, 08:12 PM   #6
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i think she looks pretty good! a lil too musculair in my taste but w/e shes a warrior :P

theres just something strange going on between her legs... i dunno how to call that part of the body in english, but there is some shape down there u know what i mean? she dont have it, it looks like her legs are just like glued to her... body...

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Old 12-14-2003, 08:16 PM   #7
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Yeah, I deleted that one in my "cleaning" cuz it was not in the right place(or something). It should've been more to the left...
NO MORE FEEDBACK???
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Old 12-14-2003, 08:20 PM   #8
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meh... It's dirty...

and you need thinner lines... and the left arm looks funny... otherwise, it is good.

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Old 12-14-2003, 08:38 PM   #9
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Thats better...

NEW ULTRA-CLEAN: Cleans the paper outside the actual pic TOO!!!!

(And maybe the left arm is A LITTLE too big)
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i still think the spot between her lags looks spooky..
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Okey, okey, I'll try to add it in photoshop... (If I showed u the original u might freak out;) )
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Old 12-14-2003, 08:48 PM   #12
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Alright, since you're really screaming for feedback, I'll give you some.

First, please scale down the picture some. A secret to good images is to shrink them down after you're finished. It makes the lines look finer and more crisp, and it also makes the work look much more detailed.

Second, I understand that it can be hard to start working on a picture that you've already 'finished', must this picture needs more work. At the very least, it'd be nice if you finished the left arm, and maybe even include the right hand.

Third, you've left out a very significant piece of this female's anatomy: her hips. "Girls got booty." This one needs hips. I'd suggest you try and find some sketches by other artists using this same pose and angle and look at how they drew the hips.

Fourth, her right leg is a bit large. It might have something to do with the size that you drew this. It appears that the original may have been quite small. You might want to think about redrawing it a little larger and trying to fix those mistakes.

Fifth, I really like the detail you've put into the head. The leaves in the hair and the hair itself looks quite nice. I think the pose is nice, except that we don't see her left arm. The way you've put grass under her right foot, I think, nicely mirrors the leaves in her hair, but it begs you to draw the rest of the background; you might want to think about leaving that grass out.

I hope this is the feedback you're looking for. I can't really say anything else until you show me something new.
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Old 12-14-2003, 08:53 PM   #13
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If I had done it on by hand it would've been A LOT better, this will ahve to do for now...
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needs to be a lil more to the left, but yeeee! ur making her not be 2 freaky anymore woot
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GREAT FEEDBACK!!! This is just a test picture that u can review so I get the atanomy right, Im gonna make the real thing on a nicer paper;) .
By other means, its not finished.

2nd: Hands and the rest of the arm is not that related to the atanomy so I didn't make em.

4th: Large? I see that the lower-leg-part of the right leg and up to the kneel is not right but the rest looks just fine to me.

3rd: Hips, hips... *tries to find dictionary* I think I know what u mean but Im not sure... So plz explain if u have the time!

Thx for the feedback Undertow! (all others: LEARN FROM UNDERTOW!!)
This is actually my fourth girl I've ever made! (Its my fourth anime/manga ever too... hope it looks like it)

Erwenpeller: Maybe the original wasn't that bad after all... nah
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