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Old 01-16-2007, 10:57 PM   #1
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you guys really haven't liked my art (well accually my attitude) in the past but i have been taking art classes and getting better at drawing i will soon start individual art lessons here's something i drew yesterday hope you like it.

p.s. I HAVE CHANGED MY ATTITUDE!

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Old 01-16-2007, 11:16 PM   #2
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ok I think the head is a bit small, but since I don't know a thing of proportions I'm not sure.

The handle of the sword and the scroll like things look really plain. Also it doesn't look dwarvy at all, looks more like a giant actually (prolly because of the small head or the small books)

Other than that I think it looks nice
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Old 01-16-2007, 11:26 PM   #4
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@Mc !: His head is supposed to be small lbecause his armour is super bulky.

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The perspective is all off, youll notice that its kinda at a slant and throws off an unbalanced look. Do you use the stickman figure before drawing or just drawing out of nowhere.

But yes its better then your previous works, but still needs some work.
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Old 01-17-2007, 12:39 AM   #6
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tiki: funny thing is this is the first drawing i have ever used a stick figure armture for lol. if i just rotate it a bit would it look better or if i added a shadow below him? It's supposed to look like his left foot is infront of his right... I don't think i achieved that.

edit: just throwing ideas out there would it look better with a rock under his foot? (see attachment)
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Old 01-17-2007, 02:33 AM   #7
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Thousands of times better than the stuff you posted before.
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Agreed. But you could have sized it down a little more, i dont have photoshop right here, so i cant fit it on my screen in its whole, wich makes it hard to judge it.

What i can see though, is that the detail is nice. It's not well-connected everywhere, some bits dont make a whole lot of sense and your linework is extremely sloppy, but you do have the imagination to go places, i like that.

Proportion wise, he really looks more like a human (in most fantasy worlds anyay) dwarves are usually broader then humans, with bigger heads, but especially broader.
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erwt: if i shortened the legs would it look more dwarven
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Uh, his palm is bigger (by a significant margin) than his head. And his arms are at least as long as his legs, super bulky armor or no. Other than the proportions which are completely off, the rest of him is pretty decent, with some interesting details. Your shading needs work though and the line art isn't very good either. But still, a nice one.
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Old 01-17-2007, 10:50 PM   #11
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Well youve gone from crap to decent so please continue probing your art skills no one will penalize you for trying (as long as you improve,LOL).
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Can i post a request right here?
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Old 01-17-2007, 11:34 PM   #13
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Old 01-18-2007, 12:21 AM   #14
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can someone please make a model of my picture? i can post a picture of ideas of for animations
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Getting someone to do a request is harder than it looks still good luck to you.
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