Forest preview

DeaD_MeN_WalkiN · 12-27-2006, 01:14 PM

Also Written in The Hive.

I was bored so I decided to do some terrain. I spent 30 minutes on this and I'd appreciate all sorts of criticism, and all types of reps! :P.

Please give a rating out of 5 for this.

P.S Ignore the white stuff I forgot to remove them from Paint

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[Death] · 12-27-2006, 01:55 PM

Second screenshot:
You can see a blue expanse where land covered by the fog is. Get rid of it with CRTL+Mouse Wheel to lower the Far Z or by lowering the ground.
Use Grassy Dirt instead of Dirt, Dirt doesn't really match in a forest chock full of plants.
There seems to be a stray vine on the bottom left.
That bush in the middle of the screenshot looks very awkward, lower it into the ground so the trunk can't be seen.
Weird mountain in the background, if it's meant to be one. If you want, put it farther in the background, make more, and make the fog a darker color to blend it more with the sky.

First Screenshot:
See first two comments above. Then it's good.

Both could use a darker fog.

DeaD_MeN_WalkiN · 12-27-2006, 03:45 PM

Woah thanks. Updating soon.

Toadcop · 12-29-2006, 10:40 AM

DeaD_MeN_WalkiN nice !
+rep

12-27-2006, 01:55 PM	#2
[Death] The only one Respected User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,058	Second screenshot: You can see a blue expanse where land covered by the fog is. Get rid of it with CRTL+Mouse Wheel to lower the Far Z or by lowering the ground. Use Grassy Dirt instead of Dirt, Dirt doesn't really match in a forest chock full of plants. There seems to be a stray vine on the bottom left. That bush in the middle of the screenshot looks very awkward, lower it into the ground so the trunk can't be seen. Weird mountain in the background, if it's meant to be one. If you want, put it farther in the background, make more, and make the fog a darker color to blend it more with the sky. First Screenshot: See first two comments above. Then it's good. Both could use a darker fog. __________________ Roland Deschain, the last gunslinger, the last of his kind. The world has moved on.

12-27-2006, 03:45 PM	#3
DeaD_MeN_WalkiN Robie williams ROFL Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 292	Woah thanks. Updating soon. __________________ Always rep People + Me Nub who killed 500 other Nubs. Retired (Well I'm still doing freelance works).

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12-29-2006, 10:40 AM	#5
Toadcop BuranX Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,888 Submissions (4)	DeaD_MeN_WalkiN nice ! +rep