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Old 07-11-2009, 10:31 AM   #14
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I thought the wings looked splendid in the first version, nice and "constructed". They look like stylized wings on a piece of armor, which is what they should look like.

I don't like the frill. The design itself is decent but due to the way it wraps around the edge of the cloak it defies gravity as it progresses to the vertical bit, and that looks kind of silly. The rest of the cape is nice.

The armor design is extremely bland, nothing going on there and pretty much the same as warden. You've picked two colors and strongly highlighted both with huge blots of white. Combined with the ever-present black lining this creates a contrast that's extremely harsh on the eye. Choose one of the armor colors to bring forward and give that color the brightest highlights, tone the other one down just a little bit.

One last thing, the colors and contrast beneath the mantle, basically from the breasts down, are the same as the rest of the armor, while this should be designed to draw less attention. Think about things like that, tone down detail and contrast.
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