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Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:08 am
yoda

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(he's the guy who created Star Trek if you didnt know)

Earth is more or less a utopian society with no poverty, hunger, and almost no crime. The Terrans were sent in four ships to a distant star as willing colonists in The Great Journey. Something happens to the computer system and their journey is even farther than expected. The four ships crash onto three different planets. Eventually they all come in contact with one another and a peaceful government is created and they all work in harmony. They send out exploration vessels. One of them is captained by Captain James Raynor.

James Raynor is exploring a world on the edge of the Colony space and sees a parasitic growth enveloping the world. A small team heads down to the world to investigate. After studying the growth for a few days they go back to the Colonial capital on Tarsonis to relay his findings to Exploration Fleet Command. Since the growth was changing the planet they send a few ships to investigate. When they arrive they find a large Hive center and many other building-like growths as well as an apparent brood-like organizational system. Intriged by the new creatures, they send a team down to investigate. The Zerg kill the team immediately after they land on the surface. Alerted to the presence of the Terrans, the Swarm sends a few Mutalisks to kill the Terrans. One ship is destroyed and the rest of the Exploration Cruisers run away.

As they are leaving the planet, the Protoss come having detected the Zerg at the edge of their space and they kill all life on the planet. The protoss send a scout to the Terran Colonial capital and the Terrans accept a peaceful alliance with the Protoss. The Protoss give the Terrans all their scientific information on the Zerg and the Terrans say the Zerg should be preserved.

Meanwhile the Zerg spread to more worlds and get closer to the Terran Capital. The Terrans try to reason with the Zerg some more and try to find a peaceful solution. After a few very small battles between two or three ships, they contact the Overmind and work out a neutral zone between their space where they will not fight but if either goes in the other's space, they will fight.

The Protoss hang back and have little to do with the story except for providing some assurances and suggestions.

The end.

Bottom line, it would suck just like Star Trek.



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Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:15 am
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If it was written by George Lucas...

LONG LONG AGO, IN A GALAXY FAR FAR AWAY....

War has erupted....


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:27 am
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or if it was wriiten by tolkien



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Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:28 am
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Spoon wrote:
If it was written by George Lucas...

LONG LONG AGO, IN A GALAXY FAR FAR AWAY....

War has erupted....


just cause its sci fi doesn't mean he would start it like that. only if it was in the star wars universe, which it wouldnt be.


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:00 am
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Far Far Far into the future, An infestation has taken place on a
planet named Aiur, The Protoss wich has lived there for
many generations, have rescently learned of "Zerg".



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Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:01 am
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Written by Lucas:

So the terran colonies were all fun, but then there came a nazi government, but luckily enough there was a Rebellion! Sons of Korhal, heroic valour, pride, big battles, more fighting, father and son conflict, rebels win! Yay!
Oh, and there were some other races but they're not human so not so fun to make movies about because you can't reason with them properly. Except that one protoss called Jaratul who's silly all the time.

Could be quite fun, if you ask me. Only I don't really like Jaratul.



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Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:26 am
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That's really funny.. Jaratul


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:31 am
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Is it just me?

Or the girl in okimhavingfun's siggy is on a weird pose?


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 2:26 am
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you people are fucking retarded. its about if GENE RODENBERRY WROTE IT not "OMG LETS COPY HIM BUT HAVE OTHER WRITERS"


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 2:27 am
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Yoda that WAS an absolute riot. I havent laughed that hard in a long time. Great stuff!


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 2:29 am
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how about "The Lord of the swarm"? or "The lord of the zerg"
The lord of of my D----


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:23 am
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zOMfG

What if Douglas Adams wrote it!, or Matt 6roeing!! or Al Gore!


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:10 pm
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or yoda???
Thatd be filled with madness drama and TONS of sarcasm!!!


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:26 pm
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yoda wrote:
you people are darn retarded. its about if GENE RODENBERRY WROTE IT not "Oh my god! LETS COPY HIM BUT HAVE OTHER WRITERS"


but that was concluded when you said 'Bottom line, it would draw in just like Star Trek.' since there is practically nothing else to add


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:59 pm
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yoda wrote:
you people are fucking retarded. its about if GENE RODENBERRY WROTE IT not "OMG LETS COPY HIM BUT HAVE OTHER WRITERS"


pfff...


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 10:16 pm
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I think

You missed a thingie, If Gene wrote it, the terrans would have rescued kerrigan and made her a normal terran again, then she, Raynor, and others would have been promoted to generals or something like that, and they would start a new series of atonishing adventures in space...


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 11:05 pm
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well if gene roddenberry wrote it, it wouldnt really have a plot so much as they would just go around looking at new stuff.


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 11:12 pm
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Yeah and

Amusing things would happend when Kerrigan used her telepathy to unveil other people's minds, yet they would never say why she has that 'power'.

And they would travel in time for the most sassy reasons.

Like>

"Adjutant: Captain the Zerg are attacking"
"Raynor: We must travel in time and bring a stegosaurus to the ship, our data base says they can communicate with the zerg to reach a peaceful agreement. That is the only way out, disable all weapons and shields in the meantime"


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Wed Aug 24, 2005 11:15 pm
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haha yea

and there would be these seemingly important set of rules laid out for doing a certain thing just so they could take the time to make a big deal when they break the rule even though it never has any effect on their decision to ultimately break the rule in a pathetic attempt to seem more rebellious.



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Wed Aug 24, 2005 11:20 pm
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O.o

And protoss and part/zerg guys would be around the ship working with the terrans. Their names would be "Mr. Tassadar" or "Mr. Brainless Zombie" because aliens are not worthy of ranks, at least not until they prove their skills in some strange fashion.


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